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GA Writing Prompts - 68. Poetry Prompt # 18 – Rubaiyat

Musings

I’m lying on the ground, watching the sky
And I wonder what is out there and why
I travel there, faster than light, and see
Aliens, planets, and spaceships flying by

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Bridge

A bridge in the forest at dim twilight
A drear dismal image of black and white
The atmosphere’s hazy, cold and unreal
A surreal scene of horror and fright

What’s going on? Are they going to kill?
Whose destiny is about to fulfill?
Who is the man with the rope round his neck?
Why doesn’t he flee? The man’s standing still

Could he get free like an escape artist
Who in a second can free head and wrist?
Fall, dive, unfetter, and then crawl and swim
And vanish into the fog and the mist

Sheer force of will, determination grim
It’s a matter of life and death to him
They’ll shoot at him at a furious rate
The odds are against him. The chance is slim

A race against time, exceptional state
He feels that he’s in control of his fate
Increased perception and his senses keen
Time is slowed; every bullet comes late

He stops and sees what he has never seen
The beauty of nature is genuine
He feels nature’s mercy and love: agape
A woman smiles. She’s reaching out to him

Nature’s compassion puts on human shape
Hail Mary, blessed art thou and full of grace
Holy Mary, pray for me now - because
The hour of my death I cannot escape

Dolores Esteban
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First of all, I love the muse one. It's wonderful to daydream, and it would be a very bland poet who could not relate to sentiments of awe and wonder.

 

The bridge one is wonderful too. I like how you linked the rhymes, and followed the story from the beginning.

 

Beautiful work, and thank you for taking the poetry prompt challenge!

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oh both are great.
The Muse is very good, I enjoyed it.
I watched the Occurence at the Bridge .. and i think you did a great job telling that story.

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On 02/14/2016 12:16 PM, AC Benus said:

First of all, I love the muse one. It's wonderful to daydream, and it would be a very bland poet who could not relate to sentiments of awe and wonder.

 

The bridge one is wonderful too. I like how you linked the rhymes, and followed the story from the beginning.

 

Beautiful work, and thank you for taking the poetry prompt challenge!

Thank you, AC Benus. I'm glad you liked the poems. The second prompt was a tough challenge because the movie was devastating.

 

Thanks for another intriguing poetry challenge.

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On 02/14/2016 12:53 PM, Mikiesboy said:

oh both are great.

The Muse is very good, I enjoyed it.

I watched the Occurence at the Bridge .. and i think you did a great job telling that story.

Thank you. I'm happy to hear you liked the poems. :)

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