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Lust and Chastity - 10. Chapter 10

Finian Fair let out a long sigh as he zipped up his graduation gown in front of the mirror. He picked up his cap with a sour expression on his face. He didn't know what direction the tassel was supposed to go. Was it left to right, or right to left? He wanted to ask his dad, but the man was sick in bed and Fin didn't want to disturb him. Of all the days to have a high fever, it would have to be on his graduation day. The seventeen year-old understood that falling ill was out of his father's hands. It wasn't like Robert Fair had set out to get sick on purpose. Still, he couldn't help but feel forlorn without him being there.

After the…incident…at prom, he had thrown away the shirt that belonged to his suit and then hid the remainder of the suit all the way in the back of his closet. As much as he didn't want to associate what happened with the suit that his father had gone through so much to buy him, a part of his mind still did. He had yet to tell his father about it. Hell, he didn't know if he'd ever be able to gather that kind of courage at all. Your pathetic excuse of an, apparently, gay son ended up drunk on spiked punch and couldn't fend off his high school bully from having at him.

He hadn't even been able to tell him about falling for a man in the first place. The young man placed a hand on the mirror before him and frowned. Finian never wanted to keep anything from his father. He didn't know how or when, but he would tell Robert Fair everything, even if it killed him.

Thoughts of the man he had fallen for rose to his mind, causing him to clutch his gown over his heart. Alistair had been kind and patient over the last couple of months. The Nightmare gave him enough time and space for Fin to be able to push the…prom incident…aside. Had he truly pushed it aside? Or had he hidden it away in the recesses of his mind? Finian couldn't tell. But, he vowed to himself to keep such a thing from dragging him down.

Finian straightened his posture in determination and walked out of his room and down the stairs. Just as he opened the front door to leave the house, he heard a wheezing cough behind him.

"Wait," Robert Fair called from the doorframe. The older man wore a thick black robe over a set of pajamas and a pair of fuzzy house slippers. "Can't I at least see my son off on his big day?" He asked in a breaking voice.

Fin rushed over to give his dad a tight hug, despite the man's attempts to keep him at arm's length so that he wouldn't get sick, as well.

"I'm really sorry I can't go, sport." Robert insisted.

"Get some rest, Dad. The Kiernys will take lots of pictures, I promise," the teenager replied as he rushed over to the door, his cap in hand. He turned to give his dad a parting smile before walking through the door. Though Fin was already tearing up, he didn't want his father to see how upset he really was. After all, what graduating teen didn't want at least one of their family members there, cheering them on? All that Finian had was his dad. The older man could only be there with him in spirit.


His sadness was eventually chased away with the help of Jack's family. They all cheered them both on the entire time at the auditorium, especially when they crossed the stage to shake the principal's hand and retrieved the envelopes for their diplomas. Finian couldn't have been more grateful to have known, and grown up with, the Kierny family.

It seemed almost impossible to escape the auditorium. They kept running into classmates and families who wanted to talk and reminisce. They finally tore loose, only to get stuck in the traffic of honking horns and teens celebrating their freedom. The Kiernys and Fin laughed through it, happy as everyone else.

They finally made it to the community center where they were having their co-party. They'd decorated the night before with green and white, the school colors. Jack's mom had stopped by before the ceremony and turned on the crockpots and put out the cakes and cream cheese mints. Balloons and twisted crepe tape was everywhere, not to mention graduation themed decorations of all kinds. Jack grinned as he thought to himself that it looked like a party store threw up. He loved it.

"Everything looks great!" Finian commented as he walked around the center. The two of them had left their caps and gowns in the car. Lee'en had promised to meet them there to join in their celebration, but the pink-haired unicorn had yet to arrive.

Jack sidled up to Finian. "Hello, graduate." He threw an arm around his blond friend. "We did it! We conquered the beast known as the public education system."

"The basics, anyway," Fin agreed with a grin, wrapping his arm around his taller friend's waist in a half-hug. That was when he caught sight of Lee'en. "Whoa..." He whispered. He had only ever seen the unicorn in casual clothing, but that time, he went all out. Finian didn't even realize that he was still staring.

Lee'en had grown out his pixie cut enough on top to be able to swoop it up and slightly to the side. He had a hint of eyeliner around his eyes and two black studs on one of his ear lobes. He wore a wine-colored choker that matched his wine-colored leather pants. His shirt was white, asymmetrical, and ripped in certain places. The shirt had mesh on the sides and the deep brown hiking boots on his feet had burgundy laces.

Jack poked Fin in the side. "Are you having a stroke? Do we need to call an EMT?"

Fin yelped, startled out of his staring. "Sorry, I...I mean, Lee'en..." He stammered. "He's wearing dark red leather pants!" Was all that he could manage to relay.

"Unf," Jack purred. "What else is he wearing?"

The blue-eyed teen cleared his throat. "Dark brown boots and a white shirt with rips in the front and back, but mesh on the sides..." Fin described. "And a dark red choker?"

Jack let go of Fin so he could casually cover his crotch. "I want to feel him."

Fin waved at the unicorn and made a motion towards Jack with his head before walking away to one of the tables to give them some privacy.

Lee'en walked up to Jack as if he were a model on a runway, thought the human could see none of it. He reached down to take hold of one of Jack's wrists, leading him over to a spot where no one could see them. He then took hold of both of Jack's hands and placed them on his leather-clad hips. "This is a special occasion, after all." He then leaned up to press a kiss to Jack's lips. "Congratulations, big guy."

Jack found Lee'en's lips and claimed them, as well as the rest of the unicorn's mouth. It left both of them a little breathless.

"Damn, I wish I could see you, baby," Jack whispered. "You sound so fucking hot." The human pressed his body close to Lee'en's, his erection obvious. "Just thinking about it does this to me. If I actually saw you I'd probably cream my pants."

The unicorn felt a rolling shiver down his spine. He was rather pleased at the human's reaction. He pressed the letters for 'later' into Jack's hand and shifted forward to press his thigh against the clothed member as he gave a gentle bite to the side of the human's neck. "Consider it my congratulations present."

"Fuck," Jack breathed out on a sigh. "You make me want to skip the party and find a bed to drag you to." He allowed Lee'en to take his hand and lead him back out to the main area of the room, though he had to stand behind the dessert table for a few minutes until his erection settled down.

People came and went from the party, some staying longer than others. Many had other parties to go to. Jack enjoyed seeing his extended family, even his Great Uncle Louis who took great joy in getting Jack's dad's blood pressure up by playing devil's advocate in every conversation. Jack was just happy no one was drinking. A drunk Great Uncle Louis was likely to get someone to punch him.

It was fun. Both Finian and Jack talked too much and ate too much cake and nachos while taking congratulations and kind teasing from friends, family, and, in Jack's case, former lovers. Around eleven that night, Finian couldn't help but think of his ailing father back home. He asked Jack's parents to take him back.

The party was winding down anyway, so they decided to pack it in. They loaded the leftover food in the trunk and did a whirlwind cleanup. With the help of some of Jack's extended family that had stayed to help, they were ready to leave by eleven-thirty. They locked up and dropped the keys in the drop box. Jack fell asleep on the way home, reminding Fin of a little kid. He blinked blearily as they pulled into the driveway of the Kierny house next to Finian's home. Jack yawned as he hugged Fin one more time and they agreed Finian could come get his presents out of their trunk the following day when he had a chance. The blond walked the short distance to his home as Jack sleepily helped carry empty crockpots inside his own house.

Lee'en was rather proud of his two favorite humans for having reached a milestone in their lives. As the Kiernys put things away in the house, he snuck his way into the teenager's room and waited patiently for him at his desk. He made sure to turn the laptop on so they could talk.

The first thing he wrote on the document was 'I am quite proud of you both. Congratulations on graduating. You both deserve it.'

"Aww, thanks, baby." Jack stole the seat and pulled Lee'en onto his lap so the unicorn could continue typing and the human could cuddle him at the same time. He'd gotten pretty good at working around having an invisible boyfriend. "And I know usually the grad is the one getting presents, but I have something for you." Jack smirked. "You want it now or would you rather wait until tomorrow?"

"A present for me?" The unicorn wondered aloud. Excited at the prospect, Lee'en typed 'NOW' in all caps.

Jack laughed and slid open a drawer of the desk. A little velvet box sat inside.

Lee'en glanced at the box and back at Jack. "What's this? If there's jewelry in here, I hope you didn't spend too much on it..." He murmured. 'Not too expensive, I hope?' He typed.

"I saved up helping at my sister's mechanic shop, it's all good." The teen smiled happily as the little box floated in the air. "Go on, open it."

Lee'en bit his full bottom lip as he slowly cracked open the box, fully aware of how odd it must seem for Jack to merely see a floating box in midair. Inside was a gleaming white gold ring. In the center was a pale pink gemstone with two smaller gemstones on either sides. They gleamed and sparkled in the light.

"The middle one is a pink sapphire," Jack said softly. "The others are rhodolites. I-I hope it fits..." The brunet sounded uncharacteristically nervous.

The ring was stunning, unlike any gift that anyone had ever given the unicorn. Lee'en was touched beyond words. His family roots weren't royalty, but they most certainly were not a low-status family, either. The twenty-year old unicorn knew to place his value in material things that meant something to him. The ring meant a great deal to him and, in essence, was highly valuable. He slid the ring on slowly enough for Jack to see it suspended on his finger before allowing the mask that kept him hidden from the human world to assimilate it.

'Perfect fit, Jack. The most priceless gift I have ever been given. Thank you so much.' He typed out immediately.

"I'm so glad you like it." Jack grinned like a kid. "I got it because I love you... And when," Jack swallowed. "Well, I've been thinking. When the time comes and Fin turns eighteen, I don't want to just come over and see you and come back home again." Jack looked down and then back up. "I want to be with you, wherever that is."

Just like that, the pink-haired unicorn felt a pang in his heart. He tried to swallow past the knot that suddenly formed in his throat as he softly rapped his knuckles over his own chest, where his heart thundered.

"Shit, Jack." He hissed out loud. "Are you trying to kill me, now?" He took a rough, deep breath as his fingers flew over the keyboard. 'Damn, do I love you, big guy. Right now, you can't hear it in the tone of my voice. Right now, you can't see it in the way I am freaking the fuck out right now. But, I am going to do my damnedest to show you just how much tonight. I sure hope you're not too tired right now."

"I'm feeling much more awake now," Jack laughed. The teen scratched his chest. "Strange," He murmured. "I think something bit me..."

He scratched again before unbuttoning his shirt. Looking down, he saw a shape blossoming over his heart. It took the form of a deep burgundy heart before three lines seemed to pierce through it.

"What they hell?" Jack said, startled. "Is that a heart with branches?"

Lee'en frowned. "Something bit you?" He questioned as he quickly turned to help spread Jack's shirt open, fully on alert on any kind of insect bites. "I'll be damned if you're poisoned before I get you into our world, Jack Kierny!" He huffed, only for the rest of his words to strangle in his throat. "F-Fuck me! Is that a promise mark?" He squinted as the marking became a few shades darker on the human's chest. "It is! It is! Jack!" He exclaimed as he gave the human the deepest and dirtiest kiss of his life. When he finally pulled away, he turned back towards the laptop and frantically typed. 'Jack, that is a promise mark! It means that you are serious about becoming my mate some day!' As the human's words came drifting back to him, he added. 'And it looks more like a heart with three arrows to me.'

Jack moaned at the kiss and read Lee'en's words with a spinning head. "Three arrows? I'd think with you I'd just need one. You're definitely the one who's pierced my heart with cupid's arrow." Jack held his invisible boyfriend close blushing at his sappiness.

The unicorn leaned back to press a kiss to the human's chin as he typed. 'The important thing is that it's a promise mark. With that mark, you can mark me as your mate and we would be officially a couple in my world.' A gentle smile formed on his face. 'When we cross over with Finian, you could finally see me. Then, you could place your mating mark wherever you want on me.'

"You know, when you first talked about wanting to marry me and stuff it kind of freaked me out." Jack nuzzled into Lee'en's soft skin. "It doesn't sound so scary anymore... it sounds pretty perfect." The hazel-eyed teen grinned. "And anywhere, eh?" Jack reached down to slide his hand high up the inside of the unicorn's thigh. "Could I put it here?"

Lee'en's breath hitched, but he pressed a 'Yes' into Jack's free hand. "Wherever you want it, Jack." He typed. 'I'd be proud to wear it anywhere you wish to put it on me, big guy.'

Jack cupped the unicorn's balls through the leather of his pants, massaging gently. "Because if I put it there, I could kiss the mark every time I suck your cock."

Oh, Celestials. Lee'en thought to himself at the implication. 'That spot's starting to sound better and better.' He typed. 'I think it's time I thank you properly...for both, your gift and your decision.' The unicorn took hold of the human's hands and slid them up the side mesh of his shirt and then up his chest, where the open segments of cloth draped across his skin. 'Did I mention that I have no underwear on?' He typed after letting go of Jack's hands.

The already firm bulge in Jack's pants throbbed. "Fuck, baby, I think you'd better prove it."

Lee'en licked his lips and undid his pants, standing up to wiggle out of them. He kept the shirt on, but straddled Jack with bare legs. "See? No undies."

The teen slid his hands up smooth thighs to cup Lee'en's soft warm ass cheeks. "You weren't lying," he purred appreciatively. "I feel like I'm getting my own private lapdance." Jack bucked up to press against the unicorn. "I'm a naughty customer, though. I tip well, but I don't follow the no touching rules."

"Oh? Neither do I, big guy." The unicorn agreed as his hands dragged down the human's chest. He dipped down to press a tender kiss to the promise mark before sucking hard on Jack's nipple.

The human gasped, writhing under the petite man he couldn't see but he could certainly feel. His head fell back as his eyes closed, wallowing in Lee'en's touch. The Unicorn gently grazed his teeth along the sensitive nub as he pressed into its twin with a thumb, rubbing it in slow circles. He then kissed and sucked his way up the side of the human's throat, gently biting the bottom of his earlobe.

"If you could only hear my voice, Jack." He whispered. "If you could only hear the longing in it."

Jack gripped Lee'en's hips and pushed down as he started to grind upward. "Ah, you drive me crazy. I want you so bad."

A devious little smirk tugged the corner of the unicorn's lips. "Not just yet, but that doesn't sound like a bad idea at all." He tugged the human's shirt off elbows and quickly pulled off his own ripped shirt. He stood up and behind Jack, using the holes in the shirt to tie the human's wrists behind his back with the help of the chair. "You stay put for a minute." He murmured, pressing the letters for 'wait' into Jack's hand before rushing off. When he returned, he had a can of whipped cream in hand.

"I like where this is going," Jack admitted when he saw the floating can of whipped cream. He waggled his eyebrows suggestively. "Am I dessert or are you dessert?"

The unicorn opened Jack's pants and roughly pulled them down along with Jack's underwear. "You, of course." He shook the can eagerly and then dispersed a long line of whipped cream over the human's length. "Consider this my congratulations for graduating, big guy." He admitted as he sucked hard on the tip and worked his way down to the base. He increased and decreased the suction as he saw fit, devoting his tongue, lips, and throat to the flesh in his mouth.

"Ooooooh fuck," Jack moaned.

His hips flexed as he fought to keep his ass on the chair. His toes curled into the rug as he bit his lip and made sexy happy noises.

As he continued to move over the length, Lee'en briefly shifted into faun form. He squeezed the fluid that surrounded his own shaft and reached behind himself to coat and stretch his entrance. He couldn't wait much longer. The unicorn wanted nothing more than the heated rod in his mouth to be inside his core. Lee'en pressed the tip of his tongue into the slit, relishing the taste of Jack's pre-cum, before he shifted back into his human form and straddled him once more.

"I can't wait any longer, Jack." He gasped as he lowered himself onto Jack's cock with a guttural moan.

The brunet planted his feet and thrust upward with a grunt. He tensed and the chair tipped back.

Lee'en gasped at the tilting, but he paused and shifted them back down, wincing at the noise it caused. He reached around to press the letters for 'keep still' into Jack's hand. The unicorn's hands then took hold of each of the human's knees as he leaned back and began to ride him with fervor. His hips didn't stop moving.

Jack fought not to move, the pleasure forcing him to tremble with the effort.

"Baby, I'm close," the brunet gasped. "But I can't reach you. I want you to cum with me."

"Don't worry about me," Lee'en said as he shifted forward once more, grinding and shifting against the human beneath him. He took himself in hand and began to stroke himself as he leaned down to kiss and bite Jack's lips.

Jack couldn't hear him, but he could feel the unicorn's intention. Lee'en wasn't stopping and Jack let himself go. He threw his head back with a grunt and let his peak crash over him. He shot deeply into his lover's tight warm, his head dizzy and his body tingling.

The unicorn wasn't that far behind him, he groaned as he came hard, all over the human's chest. He panted as his body shivered and twitched. "I won't ever let you go, Jack Kierny. So long as you love me, I swear that I won't."


After the day of long ups and downs, Finian felt exhausted. He peeked in on his dad to check his temperature and breathed a sigh of relief when he found that his temperature had lowered back down. He then carefully left the room so as not to wake him and stripped out of his clothes as he made his way up to his room. Though he didn't really feel like it, he forced himself to take a quick shower and pull on some pj's before hitting the sack. As soon as his head touched the pillow, he was out like a light.

Finian found himself surrounded by blue rose petals of every shade variation imaginable. There was the pale blue of a glacier, the deep blue-black of the evening sky, the turquoise of balmy oceans, and the cobalt of Alistair's eyes. They surrounded him so deeply on the bed that Finian couldn't see the mattress. The teen was naked and the petals were as soft as cool velvet against his skin. When he glanced up, Alistair was there at the foot of the bed, clad in nothing but a black satin robe, hunger in his eyes as his gaze caressed every inch of the platinum-blond.

Finian took one of the rose petals between his fingers, one that had a deep sapphire hue. It felt soft and real, they all did. A soft pink blush spread over the teenager's face down to his neck, chest and shoulders.

"They're beautiful." He whispered. "But, you still outshine them in beauty."

The satin fell silently from Alistair's shoulders.

"You're stealing my best lines, love," the Nightmare teased as he crawled slowly onto the bed. "Congratulations on your graduation." Alistair knelt next to the teen. "I'm very proud of you."

The smile on Finian's face was wide and pleasant. Alistair, much like his father, wasn't able to actually see him graduate. But, those words of pride warmed him to the very core. "Thank you."

Alistair fell gracefully onto the bed next to Finian, causing a riot of blue petals to fly upward and then flutter back down on them.

"What would you like to do?" Alistair said gently. "You're the man of the hour. Anything you wish."

"Anything I wish?" Finian asked as he worried his bottom lip with his teeth, trying to think of the best way to phrase what he wanted. His dark blue eyes peered over at the Nightmare, briefly meeting cobalt before glancing away. "...even a kiss?"

"Of course," Alistair chuckled. "I wonder if that will be more of a gift for me, though." The Nightmare stroked Fin's cheek. "What kind of a kiss would you like? Or would you simply like to show me?"

The teenager's small hands raked through long indigo locks as he gently tugged Alistair down into a kiss. The tip of his tongue dragged along the Nightmare's bottom lip before slipping inside to urge its partner to play. Alistair moaned softly as he held himself barely above the human teen as they explored each other's lips and mouths. Soon, they both were becoming excited, the tips of their stiffening members touching.

Fin couldn't get enough of the taste of his mate to be. He felt shiver after shiver rolling down his spine with every stroke of their tongues against each other. His fingers threaded further into the Nightmare's hair and he clutched at the back of Alistair's head as he eagerly sucked on the tip of the man's tongue.

Alistair let his lower body drop, trapping Finian beneath him without breaking the kiss. The Nightmare rolled his hips, rubbing the silky skin of their hardened cocks together.

Finian broke the kiss to inhale a shaky gasp. "Alistair..." He breathed. By that point, his eyes had darkened to a shade as dark as the Nightmare's indigo hair. One of his hands continued to clutch at the back of Alistair's head while the other hand caressed a line down the side of the man's neck and down the center of his chest. Despite what Dale did to him, and despite his occasional night frights about the prom incident, the teenager still ached for the man above him. His unflinching desire for the Nightmare was both a relief and a blessing.

"You don't know what you do to me," Alistair said with a moan as he rubbed his length against Finian's. "I don't know how we made it this far without breaking your chastity." The Nightmare sucked in a breath. "If I keep this up, I'm going to cum all over you. Would you like that love?" Alistair threaded his fingers into Fin's platinum hair as the teen nipped and sucked the larger man's sensitive nipples. "Would you like me to paint you with my cum? Mark you as mine with my seed?"

Finian's heart began to race at the very thought. He gave the Nightmare's left nipple a final lick and nodded. "Yes, cum all over me, Alistair." He keened.

Alistair's own heart seemed to beat like a drum. He reached down and wrapped his large hand around both their lengths. The Nightmare planted his knees and began to thrust, fucking into his fist and rubbing his stiff length against Finian's with every thrust. The larger man squeezed his grip tighter as his hips moved faster, grunting and moaning until he lost his rhythm as he came, spraying white across Finian. It covered his stomach and chest, a few stripes even hitting his chin and cheek. Alistair released a final shuddering gasp and let go of himself and Finian, then rolled to the side to lay on his back on the bed of blue rose petals.

Too much. Everything was too much. The sight, the heat, the sound of Alistair's voice. Finian felt the thick cum splaying on his skin. He did his best to hold back, to calm his body down. But, almost as soon as Alistair's hand let go, he found himself arching his back. He felt a sharp tightening of his sac mere seconds before his very first orgasm ripped through him. "Hanh!" He cried out as he was once again coated with cum but, this time, it was his own. For a moment, all he felt was the sheer pleasure of release. He felt a throbbing and a few more spurts dripping from the very tip of his shaft. Was this what he had been missing the entire time?

Then, he gasped loudly as he was overcome with panic. "I came!" He whimpered as he tugged his hair back and glanced over at the Nightmare. "Alistair, what did I just do? Lee'en's going to kill me!"

The teenager's body spasmed as he was startled awake. He pulled the covers back only to reveal that he had indeed released, soiling his pajama pants. He was never one for cursing or using any kind of foul language, but at that very moment, stream after stream of profanity bubbled up into his mind. How could he have been so careless? He had been so careful for almost two entire years, only to release like this? He dreaded the upcoming conversation he would have with Lee'en.

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Oooops :*) But I'm not surprised, that was both hot and romantic. Now, why is it a problem that Fin came? Is he no longer pure enough to cross over? I'll have to go back and check.

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On 06/26/2016 03:27 PM, Timothy M. said:

Oooops :*) But I'm not surprised, that was both hot and romantic. Now, why is it a problem that Fin came? Is he no longer pure enough to cross over? I'll have to go back and check.

Finian's never found release before and he believes that their frotting and the fact that they both came somehow affects his virginal status.

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It's all in the definition (thank you, Bill & Monica), so I'm hoping the definition of virgin for Finian to cross over is NOT simply orgasming. Certainly made for a heart-thudding cliffhanger! Please don't make us wait too long for some resolution! :great:

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On 06/26/2016 11:40 PM, hillj69 said:

It's all in the definition (thank you, Bill & Monica), so I'm hoping the definition of virgin for Finian to cross over is NOT simply orgasming. Certainly made for a heart-thudding cliffhanger! Please don't make us wait too long for some resolution! :great:

We'll see what Lee'en tells him next time.

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I have come to realize that I have my own promise seal. A birthmark upon my heart. In the shape of a stylized heart on its side with a line starting from the cleft and ending at the wall to lower part of my body, close to bisecting the heart in half. I'm loving this story and wish I would have started reading earlier.

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2 hours ago, Hellsheild said:

I have come to realize that I have my own promise seal. A birthmark upon my heart. In the shape of a stylized heart on its side with a line starting from the cleft and ending at the wall to lower part of my body, close to bisecting the heart in half. I'm loving this story and wish I would have started reading earlier.

 

Oh wow! That's awesome. I have a few birthmarks myself, but nothing that resembles anything other than dots, ha ha. Please let us know what you think of the story overall if you manage to reach the end!

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