Be Myself!

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Most people, at some point, meet someone who brings a complete change to their lives and makes a huge mess. Usually it is their true love, and they never part. But sometimes this person just vanishes, the only trace of their existence being the trail of destruction and reconstruction they have left behind. Oscar met that someone in the school's toilet. This is how it turned out.

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Okay, Very nice writing style. But are you writing porn to masturbate to or are you writing a story for us to read and enjoy?

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That was a rather fun start - be interested to see where you go with it. But for a 'straight' guy, Oscar made sure to come out with style. I can see how this would upend his life rather drastically. Hopefully there will be more chapters to follow. Andy

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I thought that this story had an amazing start and that the sex details actually detracted from it. I think that your narrator's voice is extremely captivating and would like to see more of where this is going. I'm not saying that I don't like reading sex...I just think it came way too early in the story and would have been better in my opinion if you'd just said, "He raped me," and then went on to describe how the character felt conflicted by this because it would have matched the earlier part of the prologue.

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On 02/01/2011 02:39 PM, mikeymike said:
Okay, Very nice writing style. But are you writing porn to masturbate to or are you writing a story for us to read and enjoy?
Don't worry, there won't be sex again for a few chapters. I had to put it there, though - it is going to make more sense later.

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On 02/01/2011 02:41 PM, Andrew_Q_Gordon said:
That was a rather fun start - be interested to see where you go with it. But for a 'straight' guy, Oscar made sure to come out with style. I can see how this would upend his life rather drastically. Hopefully there will be more chapters to follow. Andy
Yes, Oscar was yanked out of the closet by Mr. sexy blond guy. =DI have most chapters planned already - so yes, there is more to it. Thanks for the review!

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On 02/01/2011 02:52 PM, Kavrik said:
I thought that this story had an amazing start and that the sex details actually detracted from it. I think that your narrator's voice is extremely captivating and would like to see more of where this is going. I'm not saying that I don't like reading sex...I just think it came way too early in the story and would have been better in my opinion if you'd just said, "He raped me," and then went on to describe how the character felt conflicted by this because it would have matched the earlier part of the prologue.
Thanks for the review! Hopefully in later chapters it will become clearer why the sex needed to be there so soon (and no, there won't be any graphic scenes for a while, you can sit back and enjoy the plot for now on! =D)

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This Prologue interested me and intrigued me. I like the way you narrate. It reminds me of someone but I can't put my finger on it. There was a lot packed into a small space which is always a good thing. More than anything you are a storyteller and I can feel a story coming on. The first part was masterful, overshadowing what is to come. In a way you have given us the end of the journey so we can concentrate on the ride. I like it.

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On 02/02/2011 04:56 AM, Nephylim said:
This Prologue interested me and intrigued me. I like the way you narrate. It reminds me of someone but I can't put my finger on it. There was a lot packed into a small space which is always a good thing. More than anything you are a storyteller and I can feel a story coming on. The first part was masterful, overshadowing what is to come. In a way you have given us the end of the journey so we can concentrate on the ride. I like it.
Wow, many thanks. I'm a bit short of words now... I just hope I don't disappoint you with the rest of it!

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Whopa! Really hot start *blushing* but I like this start, it was, surprising! It is really frank and demands to read more!

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On 02/02/2011 06:25 AM, Marzipan said:
Whopa! Really hot start *blushing* but I like this start, it was, surprising! It is really frank and demands to read more!
Ok, then! I hope you'll like the next one too!

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Hey- whoah! Surprise start!Really like your style of narration- it flowed and you really left me wanting to know more!!!Looking forward to more chapters :D

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On 02/02/2011 10:52 AM, Zolia Lily said:
Hey- whoah! Surprise start!Really like your style of narration- it flowed and you really left me wanting to know more!!!Looking forward to more chapters :D
Thanks! The next chapter should come along soon.

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