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Not What You Think

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Jason and Derek are a couple that decide to spend a week camping in the mountains. It's not what Derek expected, and Derek is not quite what Jason expected either...


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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 3,941 Words
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  • 4. Chapter 4
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  • 5. Chapter 5
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  • 6. Chapter 6
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  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 4,260 Words
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 9. Chapter 9
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Wow, I liked this story. Look forward to more.

And really, a cliff hanger at the end of each chapter?

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Not what you think! I guess not, sounds like Derrick is a Federal agent investigating a corporate spy agency. Although the death toll is a bit on the high side for that unless it was foreign based. The housekeeper will have quite a mess to clean up whistle.gif Looking forward to more, never knew you wrote Joe!

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From the shortest chapter yet to the longest chapter yet... ;) And yet, the readers are still left guessing. :)

 

Yeah, I'm wondering who's coming in that back door, too. How much more can Derek deal with in just one day? :o

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