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Pour Me Another - 20. Surprises in the dark

The apartment was dark when Asher and Michael returned from the park.  As the door swung open, Asher dropped his keys to the floor with a metallic thud, and roughly pressed Michael’s shoulders against the wooden door.  It slammed closed under the force of their combined weight.

Lightning flashed, sending silvery light dancing across the room before pitching them back into darkness.

Asher threaded his fingers through Michael’s wet hair, slightly yanking handfuls of dark locks as he pulled his head close enough for their mouths to meet.  Michael’s eyes fluttered closed with a moan.  A deep throaty chuckle rumbled Asher’s chest as he thrust his hips forward, pinning Michael to the apartment door.  He deepened their kiss while grinding their bodies together.

“That feels incredible,” Michael murmured against Asher’s lips.  He skimmed his fingers down Asher’s back, squeezing Asher’s ass when he reached his jeans.

The moist heat of Michael’s mouth sent shivers racing down Asher’s spine.  Their breath mingled, hearts pounded, wet bodies pressed together.

Asher growled, “I want you.”

Nipping at Michael’s bottom lip until the man trembled in his arms, Asher pulled the swollen piece of flesh between his teeth and bit it again.  The noises filling the living room were animal.  Michael was a wild man grunting and tearing at Asher’s wet clothes.

“I have to feel you. I need to touch your skin,” Michael said as he fumbled with Asher’s shirt.

“Not so fast, babe,” Asher chuckled and stepped out of Michael’s frantic reach.  Forcing Michael’s back against the door.  “Stay,” Asher teased Michael as he awkwardly removed his own shirt and dropped the wet fabric to the floor with a playful wink.

Another flash of lightning lit up the night sky.  Michael’s eyes scanned over Asher’s body illuminated by the storm.  “You’re so fucking sexy,” Michael whispered as he grabbed Asher by the waist of his pants and pulled their bodies together.  His fingers started to feather through Asher’s hair before Asher suddenly stopped him.

Asher caught Michael’s hands, lifted them to his lips, pressing kisses to the back of each knuckle.  “You just keep amazing me,” Asher’s lips vibrated on Michael’s skin.  The sensation brought a moan from deep within Michael.

A seductive grin curled across Asher’s face when without warning, he quickly dropped to his knees.  Asher’s heart raced kneeling in front of Michael.  He quickly unfastened Michael’s belt, followed by the button on his pants, and lastly the metal zipper was lowered inch by painfully slow inch.  Michael was already hard.  His erection strained against his cotton briefs and bounced when Asher freed it.  Michael threw his head back and hissed at the intimate touch.

Before sliding Michael’s pants down, Asher lightly ran his fingers along Michael’s hard shaft. “Oh god, Asher,” Michael choked, “Please don’t tease me.”  His voice was strained and raspy.

Asher let his fingers linger for a moment, but he didn’t wait long.  Instead, he grabbed the pants at Michael’s hips and slid them down, controlling his movements, skimming his fingers over Michael’s trembling thighs as he pulled the material lower.

From between Michael’s legs, Asher watched the man’s face for any objections.  Michael stood completely exposed in front of Asher.  His sultry eyes were crescent, and his breath came in short, sweet gasps.

Heat radiated off Michael’s hard body.  Sculpted flesh quivered before Asher’s eyes.  With one hand, Asher explored Michael’s throbbing shaft as the other squeezed Michael’s round butt.  With a firm nudge on Michael’s tight ass, his cock bounced closer to Asher’s watering mouth.  The silky drops on Michael’s dick coated Asher’s lips as he pressed a kiss to the wide head.  Asher swirled his tongue across the dripping slit for a few swipes before he sucked the swollen flesh into his mouth.

Michael trembled where he stood.  His head fell back as he grunted indistinguishable sounds.  Asher moaned with his lips wrapped tightly around Michael’s shaft.  He slowly pulled back until just the wide rim of Michael’s dickhead kept him from popping free of his mouth before sliding him back in.  The musky scent of Michael filled Asher’s nose.

With Asher’s skilled mouth it didn’t take long until Michael was panting and shaking on the balls of his feet.  Firmly squeezing Michael’s heavy balls in the palm of his hand nearly sent Michael over the edge.  Michael tangled his fingers through Asher’s wet hair while he bucked his hips, pumping his dick harder into Asher’s hot throat.

“Oh fuck, I’m going to cum,” Michael said trying to pull out, but Asher held him tighter as he began to unload in Asher’s mouth.  Michael grunted while he spurted stream after hot delicious stream of thick cum across Asher’s tongue. Three and four shots quickly turned into seven, eight, and nine. Asher’s heart raced.  He savored the feeling of Michael’s cock trembling in his mouth.

The tremors in Michael’s legs continued after his dick stopped pulsing between Asher’s lips.  Asher wasn’t quick to swallow Michael’s cum, instead he closed his eyes letting the tangy flavor coat his tongue.

Climbing to his feet, Asher kissed Michael.  It was a deep, claiming kiss, parting Michael’s lips so the man could taste himself.  It was demanding.  Michael stiffened for a moment before grabbing the sides of Asher’s face and plunging his tongue into the darkest recesses of Asher’s mouth searching for more of his heady taste.

“Nobody’s ever swallowed before,” Michael panted against Asher’s sticky lips.

Asher cocked his head to the side and smiled. “You just hadn’t found the right lover before now.”

“I’m sorry it was so quick.”

Lacing his fingers with Michael’s, Asher purred against his ear, “Don’t worry babe, we have all night for seconds and thirds…and fourths,” Asher said with a wink as he led Michael towards the bedroom.

The lamp on the nightstand cast an amber hue over the bed when Asher switched it on.  In the soft light, Asher noticed that Michael was frozen at the foot of the bed.  He traced his fingers across the patterns on the green bedspread, but didn’t move any closer. Michael looked lost in thought as he took long steady breaths.

Michael Waters was gorgeous.  In the dim light and with Michael’s dark hair a disheveled mess, he was breathtakingly handsome.  Asher’s heart skipped a beat, watching Michael.  He wanted this man more than he had wanted anything in his entire life, but he was suddenly worried about scaring Michael away by moving too fast.  It made Asher’s stomach twist in knots to think about losing Michael, and he silently resolved not to rush him.

“If you’re having second thoughts, I’ll understand,” Asher whispered beside Michael’s ear, making the man jump.  It was obvious that Michael was extremely nervous about what was coming next. “We don’t have to do everything tonight.”

“No,” Michael sputtered, “It’s not that…it’s just…”

Asher placed his hands on Michael’s shoulder and turned him so they were standing face to face.  “Look, if you’re not ready yet--”

“Believe me, Ash, I am ready for this, but I’m just not sure what I’m supposed to do.  I’ve been waiting so long for you!  Patiently waiting for your injuries to heal and I’ve even fantasized about this a hundred times, but now we’re here and I don’t know where to start.” Michael quietly admitted.

Asher’s heart leaped in his chest.  He smiled and gave Michael a tender kiss.  “It’s alright, we’ll take it as slow as you need and I won’t do anything you don’t want me to do, I promise.”

Michael nodded his dark head.

It only took a second for Asher to quickly remove his pants and the rest of his clothes.  He tossed them to the floor.  Michael’s hooded eyes watched every move.  They stood naked, chest to chest, as another flash of lightning lit up the sky outside the windows, opaque from the heavy rain.

“It’s raging outside.” Michael said, glancing at the water streaming down the glass pane.

“It’s raging in here.” Asher countered.

Michael silenced Asher with his lips.  The kiss was unexpectedly hard and passionate. As they kissed, they slowly moved toward the bed.  Asher lowered Michael to the mattress without breaking contact with his body.

Hands stroked.  Backs arched. Hips rocked.   They were a tangle of hot sweaty flesh.  Kissing long, deep, all-consuming kisses until their heads spun from lack of oxygen.

Asher was the first to break their connection. Michael whimpered his disapproval, but beamed when Asher rolled him onto his back and straddled his waist.  Asher eagerly explored Michael’s body.  Sucking one hard nipple into his mouth while firmly twisting the other pert bud between his fingers, a playful pinch brought a surprised yelp from Michael.

“Cheeky bastard.” Michael laughed.

Asher bit at the pebbled flesh, taut with excitement.  When Asher shifted position to pull the other nipple into his mouth for the same lavish treatment, Michael shuddered underneath him.  He noticed that Michael’s body moved in tempo with his tongue.  While Asher swirled the hard bud with his tongue, Michael’s hips stirred in small circles rubbing his dripping dick against Asher’s stomach.

Releasing the swollen little nub, Asher kissed a path from Michael’s sternum to his navel, stopping occasionally to lick the ridges along his abdomen.   Michael laughed and tried to stop Asher when his tongue dipped into his belly button, but Asher caught his wrists and pulled his hands away from his body.

“Naughty boy,” Asher teased, trapping Michael’s hands by his side.  He knew that Michael could have easily broken free of his weakened grip; instead, Michael bucked his hips, lifting both of them off the bed.

“I need to touch you,” Michael moaned.

“Soon--”

Asher was cut off when Michael unexpectedly flipped him onto his back.

“Now,” Michael playfully growled as he took control. His lips were feverish as he led a trail from Asher’s mouth to his neck.  Michael sucked on the tender flesh, bringing red marks to the surface of Asher’s skin.  Tilting his head, Asher gave Michael better access to his throat.

Asher’s body was on fire.  He was on the edge.  He loved the feeling of  nearing the brink and receding, but there was no way he would be able to continue at this pace without releasing the pressure, so he moved Michael’s hands to his painfully swollen erection.  Without any direction, Michael circled Asher’s hard shaft and started pumping it.

Lightning flashed, making Michael’s dark eyes sparkle in the silvery light.  Asher was enjoying watching Michael stroke his manhood, when he did something unexpected; Michael leaned down and covered the head of Asher’s cock with his mouth.

“Jesus, Mike!” Asher words were strangled. “You could have given me some warning.”

As Michael slid only the crown of Asher’s swollen dick in and out of his mouth, Asher thrashed his head back and forth and arched his back off the mattress.  His eyes closed.  He bit his lip.  His hips thrust in hard involuntary snaps. The muscles corded in his neck, causing the jugular vein to pop.  Asher exploded.  Michael took the first spurt in his mouth before quickly pumping the rest of the creamy load across Asher’s stomach.

Michael’s fingers alternated between a tight and loose grip as he milked every drop from Asher’s quivering dick.  With the last glop dangling in a thick strand from Asher’s quivering dickhead, Michael caught the drop with his thumb and swept it across Asher’s cherry cap.

Convulsing from the sensitive touch, Asher mumbled, “Shit, Mikie, that was a big surprise” His body continued to quake as his heavy eyelids fluttered closed with his body sated for the moment.

…To Be Continued

I'm trying to make this the best story I've ever written and I count on you guys to tell me what works/what doesn't, if I've made a mistake, or what you think about what I've created here.  Do you like it?? ;)   Too hot?? :devil:

Thanks so much for reading! Make sure to stop by next Monday to see where this goes. 0:) Kc

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Hmmmm i could have sworn I already left a review for this chapter lol. Anyway I really enjoyed this chapter it was Hot steamy and innocent to boot. I love the hesitancy Michael showed in the bedroom and when he explained why it endeared him even more to me. Asher thought it maybe he was going to fast but I loved the fact that he was all for the speed just didn't know what to do. So from start to end it was a beautiful story hot steamy and the Lightening strikes sending silver flashes through the room gave it a romantic quality all its own. Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one to be posted :P:funny::hug:

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You ass!:P You could've let us enjoy the afterglow and cuddling :,( Nope, jk. This was a great and sexy scene. I keep trying to imagine Michael. He sounds hot, and Asher can heat him up even more. Can't wait for the aftermath. Certainly hope it is positive. Great writing knothead :worship:

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Super! I have never read a better written description of love-making. Truly, you have outdone yourself. :worship: :worship: :worship:

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On 08/27/2013 11:38 AM, Daithi said:
Hmmmm i could have sworn I already left a review for this chapter lol. Anyway I really enjoyed this chapter it was Hot steamy and innocent to boot. I love the hesitancy Michael showed in the bedroom and when he explained why it endeared him even more to me. Asher thought it maybe he was going to fast but I loved the fact that he was all for the speed just didn't know what to do. So from start to end it was a beautiful story hot steamy and the Lightening strikes sending silver flashes through the room gave it a romantic quality all its own. Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one to be posted :P:funny::hug:
You did leave a review and I was just getting ready to send you a message to tell you that when we tried to fix the chapter problem that everything got deleted. I'm sorry! I was so excited about posting this chapter (I guess it was too hot and melted the posting gears, LOL) :P I really hoped you would like the lightning durning the scene, I felt it really set an electrify tone ;)

 

Thanks so much for reading! KC :D

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Great lovemaking scene that showed Michael's inexperience, eagerness, and Asher's patience and surprise. It demonstrated how they have grown together but it is still new and exciting. Great tempo and beautiful scene. I fear what must happen next. Lovin' it!

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Something was Raging, that's for sure. Really one of the better sex scenes I've read. I didn't gloss over any of it like I usually do in a story. So, yeah, having Michael hesitate was sort of endearing but mostly understandable. Man on man is not his usual modus operandi after all.

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I woke up to this this morning and BAM. Wow that sure was something. What a way to wake up! (It totally worked~)

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Holy smoke, Batman !! That was HOT HOT HOT !! I count on you guys to tell me what works/what doesn't" Yes KC I promise to do that and believe me - this chapter worked just fine !! Finally !! Michael is so cute with his insecurity at first but then takes control very, very nice chapter KC ! Now I need to take a cold shower :lmao::lol::blushing:

 

:off: Can't you pleas post a photo of all your 3 cats :) Pretty please !! :off:

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OMG!!!! I just got to work and couldn't wait to read the next chapter and now I have to wait until next Monday to finish this amazing night that they are having :worship::2thumbs::kiss: I WANT MORE,lol!!!!!!

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WOW :2thumbs: You want us to tell you what works~You just hit it!!! That was one of the best love scenes I think ever! Your writing and story telling amazes me. Very Impressive. I can't believe it was over so soon and now I have to wait for more....what am I going to do? **Take sleeping pills- wake me up when it's Monday!** LOL (j/k) You doing a great job with this story. :hug:

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Better watch it, KC - that scene may specify as 'computer-watching-porn' and try to internally conbust. lol Was it too hot? Is there even such a thing????? Neva heard of it. lol

 

Hopefully the next three, four, five, or more times go just as well. ;) lol

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Wow! That was really hot! Wow! Michaels inexperience and insecurity was cute, but I liked that he could voice that to Ash. They seem to get more connected with every chapter. Great job K.C.

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this chapter is so scarily hot!!!

thanks to you kc, my boxer shorts are soaked with pre-cum.

and i wonder how many boners and wet pussies are there after reading this chap.

a really fabulous chapter, hottest love-making description i hv ever read. :worship::worship::worship:

Michael and Asher are...just :wub::wub::wub::wub::wub::wub::wub::wub::wub::wub:

btw, alert the readers to take off the boxer shorts if the next chapter is as sizzlingly hot as this one :devil::devil:

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I think this is just the foreplay? haha! I'll be waiting for the "main event" next week? :lol:

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In a lot of stories on this site sex scenes are de rigeur and i often gloss over them as the authors works to tell me how hot the sex is. I think writing a good love scene is probably one of the hardest things to do and you have nailed it. I am caught up in the action and the emotion of the moment and i definitely feel the boys' searing heating. Can't wait to see how things continue to develop in and out of the bedroom

Thanks

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On 08/27/2013 11:39 AM, joann414 said:
You ass!:P You could've let us enjoy the afterglow and cuddling :,( Nope, jk. This was a great and sexy scene. I keep trying to imagine Michael. He sounds hot, and Asher can heat him up even more. Can't wait for the aftermath. Certainly hope it is positive. Great writing knothead :worship:
Awwww thanks Babe, but it's not over! :devil: There is still more to come, LOL ;) I figured it has taken this long to make it to this point, there is too much for 1 chapter. Thanks for reading Ms. JoAnn, hope you come back by to find out what else I have in store for them :) KC

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On 08/27/2013 11:39 AM, charlieocho said:
Super! I have never read a better written description of love-making. Truly, you have outdone yourself. :worship: :worship: :worship:
I'm glad you like it Charlie, but they aren't done. This is just starting. It took this long to get here there was no way this could only be 1 chapter. These guys have too much to cover :)

 

I've written PWP Smut before and I wanted this to be different. I wanted this to be a real connection. I hope this is a story that readers will still think about after it's over. Thanks for reading :D Kc

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On 08/27/2013 02:48 PM, Cole Matthews said:
Great lovemaking scene that showed Michael's inexperience, eagerness, and Asher's patience and surprise. It demonstrated how they have grown together but it is still new and exciting. Great tempo and beautiful scene. I fear what must happen next. Lovin' it!
Thanks Cole, It was hard to write showing Michael's emotions and his fears, but I think is was a success. I'm having so much fun with these guys, they are great characters (and it helps that the readers like them too) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you come back for next chapter cause there's a lot more to come, ;) KC

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On 08/27/2013 02:53 PM, Ron said:
Something was Raging, that's for sure. Really one of the better sex scenes I've read. I didn't gloss over any of it like I usually do in a story. So, yeah, having Michael hesitate was sort of endearing but mostly understandable. Man on man is not his usual modus operandi after all.
:P Raging...understatement! LOL I'm glad you liked it. I've constantly wondered (too much/not enough) trying to create the perfect mix of emotion and sex and connection between the characters. I'm glad you didn't skim over the chapter and hope it drew you in. :) Thanks for reading! KC

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On 08/27/2013 07:51 PM, carringtonrj said:
You write with total confidence and control, KC.
:P It's funny you say that because I am constantly questioning myself and my story...will readers like it? Will I screw up? Is it a bomb? I'm so happy you like it and are confident in me :hug: KC

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On 08/27/2013 09:18 PM, said:
I woke up to this this morning and BAM. Wow that sure was something. What a way to wake up! (It totally worked~)
Glad I could perk up your morning :P BUT it's not over yet, there is still more to come :) Thanks for helping me with my reviews! I'll try very hard not to screw up the next posting :lol: KC

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On 08/28/2013 06:27 AM, Slytherin said:
Holy smoke, Batman !! That was HOT HOT HOT !! I count on you guys to tell me what works/what doesn't" Yes KC I promise to do that and believe me - this chapter worked just fine !! Finally !! Michael is so cute with his insecurity at first but then takes control very, very nice chapter KC ! Now I need to take a cold shower :lmao::lol::blushing:

 

:off: Can't you pleas post a photo of all your 3 cats :) Pretty please !! :off:

You are so funny!! :hug: I tried really hard to have Michael's emotions come through, his fears and insecurities at his first real sexual encounter...but it's not done yet. It been too long of a build up between these 2 guys, It can't be fit into 1 chapter.

 

(There are kitty pics in my gallery :P) KC :hug:

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On 08/28/2013 08:36 AM, bevagale said:
OMG!!!! I just got to work and couldn't wait to read the next chapter and now I have to wait until next Monday to finish this amazing night that they are having :worship::2thumbs::kiss: I WANT MORE,lol!!!!!!
:*) There's NO Way I could read this at work (and I know what's going to happen) I would turn 10 shades of red! LOL

 

More is coming! I promise ;) Thanks so much for reading, KC

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On 08/28/2013 08:59 AM, Shadow Runner said:
WOW :2thumbs: You want us to tell you what works~You just hit it!!! That was one of the best love scenes I think ever! Your writing and story telling amazes me. Very Impressive. I can't believe it was over so soon and now I have to wait for more....what am I going to do? **Take sleeping pills- wake me up when it's Monday!** LOL (j/k) You doing a great job with this story. :hug:
Thanks so much! It's been such a build-up to this point there was no way to cover it all in just 1 chapter. I think you will be very happy with the conclusion of this chapter in the next posting. It even made me a little ((cough-cough)) hot under the collar! :P Thanks so much for reading, KC

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