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Timmy's Journal - 12. Poetry Prompt 15 - Free Verse - poem 2, Freedom
Poetry Prompt 15 - Free Verse
This is the response to the second scene, The Bathing Scene from Room With A View.
My syllable count is 8-6-9 8-6-9 6-7-9. In this case, it's my perspective as a bather with my friends.
Freedom
The coolness of water calls us
Calls to our free nature
Our world demands we demurely, be
But here, alone with each other
Our bodies simply free
Clothing is a shield we do not need
There is no urge to hide
But I feel an attraction
To you, there - wet and warm before me
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