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timmy's poetry - 12. Chains

In the early morning I can hear its song
though its wee small voice is fleeting
my soul yearning for something more
and sadness I can feel comes creeping

And the tears sit waiting but are not wept
for what earthly good will it do?
I can cry for an age but it would not be enough
There is no cure for what ails, not even you

You speak of hope but I have none
at least I don’t today
But I cannot do what must be done
To take this pain away

On days like this I am tired of life
of the pain I carry like a canker
It’s a Dickensian chain heavy and thick
and its weight wants to drag me under

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Hey tim

 

:hug::hug:This is what these words pull me to do...

 

As always nicely - and powerfully - done. 

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MacGreg

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You're not alone, babe. There is hope - don't turn away from the good things that bloom around you. Just as your inner pain hurts you, your words hurt those of us who care about you. Many hugs.

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10 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

Hey tim

 

:hug::hug:This is what these words pull me to do...

 

As always nicely - and powerfully - done. 

Aw Reader.. thank you .. 

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10 hours ago, dughlas said:

Awww, love you little brother ...

thank you.. i'm sorry.. i should ask you guys not to comment on these.. i'm okay

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5 hours ago, MacGreg said:

You're not alone, babe. There is hope - don't turn away from the good things that bloom around you. Just as your inner pain hurts you, your words hurt those of us who care about you. Many hugs.

Thanks M.. i struggle sometimes but mostly i'm okay. If i didn't write it, it would be worse. Thanks hugs.. xo

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A searingly sad, well-written poem... our demons require constant guarding against... I get it... all I can offer is a hug :hug: ... I hope you have an easy sleep tonight, because sometimes that's half the battle... Gary xoxo

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21 hours ago, Headstall said:

A searingly sad, well-written poem... our demons require constant guarding against... I get it... all I can offer is a hug :hug: ... I hope you have an easy sleep tonight, because sometimes that's half the battle... Gary xoxo

You're so right Gary..  but i was so disturbed that night.. i dont know why.. i should have just got up and written stuff down like you did.. maybe that would have helped. 

 

xoxo

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3 hours ago, asamvav111 said:

Dickensian chain heavy and thick

 

Beautiful construct.

Thanks so much my friend!  I appreciate it xo

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