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timmy's poetry - 34. Echoes

This is a D/s scene, just be aware

Echoes

 

Here in this small birch glade you beckon me close

You take the small pack; drop it gently into the grass

Hand in my hair, pulling me close until our lips graze

You whisper; Shed your clothes boy

 

 

The switch you prepare carefully, lovingly, eyes on me

You lean against a tree as i follow your soft commands

i am naked, silent, eyes lowered, standing in the soft grass

The air sings as you test the birch, while you circle me

 

 

My body flinches, knowingly and i fight to control it

“On your knees, hands on thighs, eyes down—now”

i comply, breathing, listening as leaves talk in the wind

You hold my face against you: Memorize my scent boy

 

 

And you are everything as i take you into my lungs

There’s a void when you go, but you are in me and mine

And you walk and say: Prepare boy, do not flinch

i am still as i take the first, pain echoes through me

 

 

More follow as promised, none break the skin

But i do not care, for i’d bleed a river for You

Remain silent and still until released

If it pleased you, i’d do anything if it did that

 

 

And then it is done, i hold my place awaiting your words

You draw your cool hand over your creation

i tremble as you raise me, hold me against you

Your arms encircle me as you pronounce me, good.

 

 

As i stand there with you, i love all you are

You are my reason, the one i serve

We are silent as the wind whispers through the leaves

Their song and your breath on my neck, all i need

 

 

 

 

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Echoes of a sweet memory ... thanks for reading
Copyright © 2017 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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Wow. I read this and every sense was heightened, every nerve ending on alert. You have me firmly in this memory, etching it in my mind. Beautifully done. 

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46 minutes ago, mollyhousemouse said:

yes

so many feelings, memories

all of this

yes

 

as always, very grateful that you share your talents with us

Thank you molly ... for always reading .. xo

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3 hours ago, Caz Pedroso said:

A beautiful and loving memory.  Thanks for sharing it :hug:

Thanks Cazzie xxoo   it was a beautiful day  and i'll never forget it

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5 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Completeness! How some of us wish those moments would never end.

i wish they would never end but hopefully there will be more.. xox

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5 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Wow. I read this and every sense was heightened, every nerve ending on alert. You have me firmly in this memory, etching it in my mind. Beautifully done. 

Thank you Parker .. it was something very special ... xoxxo

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5 hours ago, Lyssa said:

A declaration of trust and love.

Thank you my sweet Sister xxoxo .. you're right it was.. 

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For a switch, not just any old tree branch will do. It must be carefully chosen. you captured the essence of your special afternoon in the forest exquisitely here, tim. I could almost hear the wind in the trees.

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1 hour ago, MacGreg said:

For a switch, not just any old tree branch will do. It must be carefully chosen. you captured the essence of your special afternoon in the forest exquisitely here, tim. I could almost hear the wind in the trees.

Yeah they do have to be selected carefully. It was an intimate time and very profound for me. I don't want to forget it, so i just had to write about it. The trees helped with focus .. thanks for your wonderful comments. Means a lot, Sir. 

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On 7/9/2017 at 4:07 PM, Defiance19 said:

Damn tim.... That was just beautiful, so full of...well, just full.. You know? 

i was looking for this poem.. and look what i found as well.. thanks Def.. sometimes i need to comen an read this again

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4 hours ago, Thorn Wilde said:

So beautiful. Thank you.

thanks Thorn.  i love our Life it holds great meaning  for me

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