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timmy's poetry - 39. Being Real

1. is me, missing stuff from the tool-box of life

2. as a dear friend put it ...why can't people just be nice .... written about a faker in my life, but dedicated to a friend who was hurt.. again.

1.

 

Sometimes I feel like im not alive

Like a wisp of a person

Not fully formed

No reason or rhyme

There’s not substance or rhythm

Just a waste of a space

Meant for more

I tried being good

Silent and still

But it just left me, less than before

 

 

 

 

2.

 

Huddled in a private corner hiding from the pain

But it’s never far enough; you’re relentless in your quest

You’d slaughter me to get your due, with a smile on your face

Your friends would watch with glee and slap you on the back

Feeding the voracious ego, that long ago devoured you

Wondering what’s happened, but you can feel no shame

Blaming everyone but you, is what narcissists do

You try to wear another’s face, but you leak out anyway

I’d recommend a mirror, but you’ll never face the truth

Because in your head you’re perfect, no need to look inside

In there you are hollow, there is nothing left of you.

 

 

 

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Thanks for reading ...
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How can a person evoking all kinds of positive feelings be a waste of space? No, tim you are needed in this world, you are! Every kind and compassionate person is needed, so strongly needed.

A great poem even if it is sad!

 

And so it does give a link to the second one. You see things clear and tell them out loud. How strong is that! Therefore you are even more needed. An other great written poem! Courageous!

 

Your poems show the beauty of your soul, tim. I am happy about everyday, you are part of my life.

A.

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in the 1st poem, you may feel "just a waste of space", but you aren't. you are loved, by so many. that whispyness touches, changes so many lives. you are substantial, even if you can't see it. the second just pisses me off. not that you wrote it, but that it happened--again

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What Lyssa and Moggy said.

 

You are important, tim, and should be admired and emulated for the compassionate wisdom you carry in your heart and in your mind. Never, ever forget that or listen to the doubters. 

 

As always, nicely done. :) 

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9 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

Loved them tim. Thank you for posting them.

thanks very much BH xo

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8 hours ago, Kitt said:

I liked the writing, not the reasons behind it. Well expressed tim.

thank you .. no i dont like the reasons for 2.  that person hurt me.. but easy to do under your avatar 

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8 hours ago, Lyssa said:

How can a person evoking all kinds of positive feelings be a waste of space? No, tim you are needed in this world, you are! Every kind and compassionate person is needed, so strongly needed.

A great poem even if it is sad!

 

And so it does give a link to the second one. You see things clear and tell them out loud. How strong is that! Therefore you are even more needed. An other great written poem! Courageous!

 

Your poems show the beauty of your soul, tim. I am happy about everyday, you are part of my life.

A.

thank you very much my sweet A xoxxo

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6 hours ago, mogwhy said:

in the 1st poem, you may feel "just a waste of space", but you aren't. you are loved, by so many. that whispyness touches, changes so many lives. you are substantial, even if you can't see it. the second just pisses me off. not that you wrote it, but that it happened--again

thank you moggy ... i agree with you about 2 .. stop hurting each other.. why are you doing it???  stupid

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4 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

What Lyssa and Moggy said.

 

You are important, tim, and should be admired and emulated for the compassionate wisdom you carry in your heart and in your mind. Never, ever forget that or listen to the doubters. 

 

As always, nicely done. :) 

aw, thank you Reader .. i dont understand why people want to hurt each other with so much glee .. it's very very sad and such a waste of time

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37 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

aw, thank you Reader .. i dont understand why people want to hurt each other with so much glee .. it's very very sad and such a waste of time

tim, i think you put your finger on it. they do it with glee. its their fun. its what they live for. the more they hurt, with words mostly, cause they are too chicken sh*t to face anyone. we think it's a waste because we don't think like that. they hide in the dark and behind a screen.

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This just reminds me how much some of us share. 

 I'm feeling the self-loathing and worthlessness of 1.

 Then the complete honesty of Mac's poem yesterday.

 2 poems connecting very personally right now. How I can't survive or cope without someone making me right to put demons away, even just for a few moments.

 Beautiful in its honesty. XOXO

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7 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

This just reminds me how much some of us share. 

 I'm feeling the self-loathing and worthlessness of 1.

 Then the complete honesty of Mac's poem yesterday.

 2 poems connecting very personally right now. How I can't survive or cope without someone making me right to put demons away, even just for a few moments.

 Beautiful in its honesty. XOXO

yes jp .. but you're beautiful... i hope you are okay... love you xoox

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4 hours ago, mogwhy said:

tim, i think you put your finger on it. they do it with glee. its their fun. its what they live for. the more they hurt, with words mostly, cause they are too chicken sh*t to face anyone. we think it's a waste because we don't think like that. they hide in the dark and behind a screen.

yes they can  but here on GA and places like you can report them and you should.  there is no reason for that stuff to happen on here.

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4 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

yes jp .. but you're beautiful... i hope you are okay... love you xoox

Thanks lil brother. Love you so much. I hope so, I'm holding on to the idea I'll be ok. Sir doesn't let me far from sight. He's my strength in mental exhaustion!

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3 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

yes they can  but here on GA and places like you can report them and you should.  there is no reason for that stuff to happen on here.

if i knew it was happening to someone other than me, i'd reported in a heartbeat

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Well...I think whatever I felt like saying is already said...! So again...U r a wonderful person tim so please don't think urself a waste of space. Lovely writing like always...sad but really well written

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