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timmy's poetry - 48. Real

There is a vagueness in me today

Like I’m far and away from home

I want to let these sad tears fall

But I don’t know where they’ll go

 

The emptiness I feel leaves me searching

For something I don’t know is lost

Maybe I’m simply a figment

But of whose pitiful imagination?

 

Maybe the day will come you’ll find me

Take me to your home so far from here

You’ll love me like I need you to

and finally then, I’ll be real

 

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You are no figment, but real to me. I am glad for that. And your hope to be taken home strikes a deep chord in me. You cry out a deep and important idea in this poem. You'll love me like I need you to reminds me that we each need to be loved by different people we know in our lives in different ways. But it is love we need. Beautiful. 

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I'm just going to point up to Lux, Parker and moogy and say, "yeah, what they said".  Hugz my friend.  :hug:

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I don't know what to say, besides: Beautiful!

 

It may be personal to you. If it is, I wish it is only temporary.

But I am sure that this one is personal to many people!

 

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11 hours ago, Lux Apollo said:

One of the toughest states of being, waiting for that something/someone else...

thanks Lux ... just wish i knew what was missing

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11 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

You are no figment, but real to me. I am glad for that. And your hope to be taken home strikes a deep chord in me. You cry out a deep and important idea in this poem. You'll love me like I need you to reminds me that we each need to be loved by different people we know in our lives in different ways. But it is love we need. Beautiful. 

thanks Parker. you're real to me too xo

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11 hours ago, mogwhy said:

i thank the universe that you are real and have graced my part of the universe. 

thank you moggy

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10 hours ago, WolfM said:

I'm just going to point up to Lux, Parker and moogy and say, "yeah, what they said".  Hugz my friend.  :hug:

i appreciate You reading, Wolfie xo

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8 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

My sweet boy I wish I knew how to give you what you seek. 

thank You Michael ... i know, Sir xo

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2 hours ago, Freerider said:

I don't know what to say, besides: Beautiful!

 

It may be personal to you. If it is, I wish it is only temporary.

But I am sure that this one is personal to many people!

 

thank you, Free. i appreciate you reading it 

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3 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

You are beautiful and real. I see and love you. Fight through this moment of doubt lil brother. xo

Thank you jp ... i'll try 

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10 minutes ago, Jsgo said:

It's very beautiful and relatable tim

love you xoxo

thank you, josh  i appreciate it  xo

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I've read this a few times, and each comment I write feels inadequate. So I'll just say I hope the vagueness passes; you are far from a figment. 

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Like everyone else tim, I doubt I would feel the way that I do about you, if you weren't/didn't feel real to me. 

That said, I wish you'd have/find all you needed so you wouldn't feel this way, and I hope you get from all of us who care just a little bit to fill that emptiness. 

:hug:xoxo

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On 8/26/2017 at 5:38 PM, MacGreg said:

I've read this a few times, and each comment I write feels inadequate. So I'll just say I hope the vagueness passes; you are far from a figment. 

thank You, Sir xo

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On 8/27/2017 at 1:17 PM, Defiance19 said:

Like everyone else tim, I doubt I would feel the way that I do about you, if you weren't/didn't feel real to me. 

That said, I wish you'd have/find all you needed so you wouldn't feel this way, and I hope you get from all of us who care just a little bit to fill that emptiness. 

:hug:xoxo

thank you, boss ... i dont know why sometimes i feel like this but i do ... i know you're real too. xoxo

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