timmy's poetry - 61. Skyscrapers and Clouds

I'm so stuck by the originality and strength of the images: whales of clouds...sea of winds. So wonderful. So evocative

Thanks for trying out the form  

These poems full of imagery the reader can almost grab for. The descriptions are beautiful. Showing the change of season and weather. This set of poems is meaningful to me tim. I used to stare in the sky endlessly. Clouds always fascinated me. Thank you for reminding me of their beauty. Much love xoxo

I loved these! Your images of woven mats of cloud, and whales of gray are inspired. Wonderful sensory writing, making great use of this form’s structure. You make gray days interesting and exciting. 

Oh, these are both so good, boy. As jp has said, you could reach and touch your clouds. Well done. 

2 hours ago, AC Benus said:

I'm so stuck by the originality and strength of the images: whales of clouds...sea of winds. So wonderful. So evocative

 

Thanks for trying out the form  

Thank you very much, AC.  It's a great form.. it seems simple, but it's more of a challenge than people may think. 

1 hour ago, BlindAmbition said:

These poems full of imagery the reader can almost grab for. The descriptions are beautiful. Showing the change of season and weather. This set of poems is meaningful to me tim. I used to stare in the sky endlessly. Clouds always fascinated me. Thank you for reminding me of their beauty. Much love xoxo

Oh jp, thank you. Your comments are quite humbling. I'm glad these brought back good memories. xoxo

20 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

I loved these! Your images of woven mats of cloud, and whales of gray are inspired. Wonderful sensory writing, making great use of this form’s structure. You make gray days interesting and exciting. 

Thanks very much, Parker. I've always found clouds to be inspiring .. i appreciate your comments. xo

4 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Oh, these are both so good, boy. As jp has said, you could reach and touch your clouds. Well done. 

thank You, Sir xoxo

ok tim, i swear you were looking out my window this morning. you painted the scene i was seeing. read them 3 times when it dawned on me what the skyscraper was  well done. they made me smile. 

4 minutes ago, mogwhy said:

ok tim, i swear you were looking out my window this morning. you painted the scene i was seeing. read them 3 times when it dawned on me what the skyscraper was  well done. they made me smile. 

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed them. 

Awesome imagery, the pallor , strength and enormity of the winter skies build with each syllable and line , then fall gently into light . Two very evocative works. 

Evocative, tim.. the imagery brings these to life. I really enjoyed them both. 

Well done, as always... 

9 hours ago, deville said:

Awesome imagery, the pallor , strength and enormity of the winter skies build with each syllable and line , then fall gently into light . Two very evocative works. 

Hello and thank you for you insightful comments. So glad these both worked so well. Thanks again. 

7 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

Whales of grey 

clouds drift past my window

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I think a pod of whales likes to stop in front of my windows to have long chats.  

 

Your words come alive as images in my mind. 

 

Well done, tim, well done!  

 

 

Lol.. yes.. there were a lot of gray whales yesterday.. thanks Reader. 

1 hour ago, Defiance19 said:

Evocative, tim.. the imagery brings these to life. I really enjoyed them both. 

 

Well done, as always... 

Hi Def ...thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed them. they were fun to write. AC new form is very interesting to use.