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timmy's poetry - 65. Wind and Whispers

things that need to be said ...

Outside winds howl

I do not want to die in winter

When all else is dead

Let me go when the sun is glorious

When flowers are plenty

When my heart tells me I’ve loved well

I am not ready today, to say goodbye

 

 

 

All the whispers in my head

Are drowned by the clanging of bells

The cacophony of voices that never stop

I listen

Listen

And like a sponge pull them into me

They pluck at me and laugh

Until I am only pieces on the floor

 

 

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thank you for listening ...
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dughlas
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You desire to die in the season if warmth, summer rather than the cold loneliness of winter. Is this mayhaps the result of your time on the street when winter was the time of death for many.

 

Whispers can be insidious and relentless but so too the love in which we embrace you is unending and enduring.

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FormerMember4
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I hope that day will not come for a very long time. You are very much loved, by numerous people. Separate the voices, your voice can set you free. Love you! xoxo

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Brayon
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As you all know, I'm not good at critiquing poems. I will say, that the first poem moved me, and I agree with it. Winter is a time for strength and perseverance. To endure until the world is made new again.

I also was moved by the second one. The inner voices that we all deal with, some more so than others, can wreak havoc on anyone. Dealing with that today myself.

 

Excellent poems tim. They connected and moved me. I hope you can find peace from such thoughts, now that you have shared them with us.

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mogwhy

i like both, but the second one really connects. i hate silences, the whispers can not be drowned out in silences. i know that you are loved, admired and respected by more people than you know or hear. 

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deville

There is a hidden power in ‘ Wind ‘ , so much strength and resolve in the closing line.’ Whispers ‘ is frighteningly intense , baring emotions many relate to , but few would express so candidly or eloquently.Thank you for sharing your voice with us. 

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Parker Owens

I read these lines and know of your strength beneath the cold and wind. You tell of voices I have heard, and feel the same disjointedness I have experienced. Thank you for your recollection of these things, for you remind me to look for the sun, and to listen for the voices of those I love. 

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Ashi

I think Winter is cold so people will stick together more.  xoxo  Wind might sound like whispers, but I think listening to your own heart is important too.

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Mikiesboy
4 hours ago, Ashi said:

I think Winter is cold so people will stick together more.  xoxo  Wind might sound like whispers, but I think listening to your own heart is important too.

you and me Ashi..we have enough to keep lots of people warm.. and listening to your own heart is very important.. xoxo

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