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timmy's poetry - 75. Views From the Window Before 7:00am

Three little observations.

1.

 

From my window I can see

Onto my balcony

And on the railing there

Drips of melting snow

Frozen in time

 

 

2.

 

Pines trees and maples stand

Side by side

The maple has been stripped bare

The pine stands in his outerwear

 

 

3.

 

Though the weather is gloomy

Gray clouds like a tarpaulin spread

My heart is not in concert

With the elements

 

 

 

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Thanks for reading!!
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Each of these observations resonates with me. I love the poem about pines and maples, particularly. Thank you for these. 

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1 hour ago, Parker Owens said:

Each of these observations resonates with me. I love the poem about pines and maples, particularly. Thank you for these. 

thank you Parker ... i have a picture .. but the windows defo need cleaning... lol

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The imagery is beautiful in these observations. I greatly dislike living in snow. Moments like this can be appreciated. The calm it brings.

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6 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

The imagery is beautiful in these observations. I greatly dislike living in snow. Moments like this can be appreciated. The calm it brings.

thanks jp.. i understand your feelings.  snow is much easier to appreciate when you see it from afar ... 

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7 minutes ago, BHopper2 said:

I enjoyed the visuals, tim. Thank you for sharing them with us.

thank you A... they've all melted now.. :( 

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1 minute ago, Mikiesboy said:

thank you A... they've all melted now.. :( 

Well, I'm glad you were able to capture them, while they were still there. :)

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:thumbup: tim, your words are my view. Nicely, and accurately, described. 

 

My brain latched onto your comment about the dirty windows. I had the same thought when I was looking out mine last night...

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9 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

:thumbup: tim, your words are my view. Nicely, and accurately, described. 

 

My brain latched onto your comment about the dirty windows. I had the same thought when I was looking out mine last night...

i took a picture but .. our vision is rather amazing that we can see by the dirt and focus on the outside...but the camera can only see the dirt first... 

 

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9 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

Wonderful. ..and yes, I'll buy you a new squeegee!

Thanks, Sir .. for the wonderful and the squeegee.

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Nice poems, tim.. Great visuals. 

 

soo, did the maple and pine have a bet and maple lost? Or is pine too shy to lay it all out? I wonder who makes the first move, or who leans in more when the wind shuffles by?   Gah! 

My thoughts, on a Friday after 8pm... I am not normal! 🙇‍♀️🤷‍♀️

 

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9 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

Nice poems, tim.. Great visuals. 

 

soo, did the maple and pine have a bet and maple lost? Or is pine too shy to lay it all out? I wonder who makes the first move, or who leans in more when the wind shuffles by?   Gah! 

My thoughts, on a Friday after 8pm... I am not normal! 🙇‍♀️🤷‍♀️

 

hmmm  Boss, i think we need to have a talk.   but being not normal is okay.. :heart: 

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