Spice Rack - 3. Attraction

Add a dash of this to summer. All the errors in seasoning are mine.

Tempt me

with honeyed words,

intoxicate all sense

and with your grace and artless gait

beguile;

drive mad

my heart by glimpses of your flanks,

and shoulders joined to nape,

all worshipping

your smile.

My thanks without end to AC Benus and Asamvav111 extend. Leave a comment if you feel so inclined. They make my day. 

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Nice and spicy, just like the others.  More, please. :)  I love the term "artless gait". :)  

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Sensual and erotic with some well placed words. There's definitely passion in you. 😉

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1 hour ago, Valkyrie said:

Nice and spicy, just like the others.  More, please. :)  I love the term "artless gait". :)  

 

Thank you for that! That term summed up so much in my mind in three little syllables. Glad you liked it. 

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9 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Sensual and erotic with some well placed words. There's definitely passion in you. 😉

 

Thank you very much for reading this. It's amazing how sensual another person can be just in the way they speak and move. If I gave that sense, then perhaps I succeeded.

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Tempt me with honeyed words This so suggests the Song of songs to me. In fact, all of it has that same sensual quality. Wonderful.

 

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Is someone feeling frisky? :)  Such a sensual declaration, Parker... passion with love... such a potent combination. I loved the directness wrapped in lovely phrasing... Kudos, my friend... I've been offline... I see there is more to check out :)  Cheers... Gary....

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4 hours ago, northie said:

 

Tempt me with honeyed words This so suggests the Song of songs to me. In fact, all of it has that same sensual quality. Wonderful.

 

 

It has that flavour, doesn't it? But sometimes just seeing and talking to someone can set one's heart racing. It may not rake much....thanks so much for reading these!

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1 hour ago, Headstall said:

Is someone feeling frisky? :)  Such a sensual declaration, Parker... passion with love... such a potent combination. I loved the directness wrapped in lovely phrasing... Kudos, my friend... I've been offline... I see there is more to check out :)  Cheers... Gary....

 

Frisky? Well, Spicy, maybe. How else to say how the sight and sound of another person can affect you? It is a lyrical experience, and one that sets fire to the heart.  Thank you for reading and responding to this. 

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Parker, your honeyed words do intoxicate.  This is indeed spicy...

 

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6 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

Parker, your honeyed words do intoxicate.  This is indeed spicy...

 

 

How good it is that you see these flavorful morsels as intoxicating. I am delighted you read this, and thank you so much for your response. 

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I am fond of honey wine and these words carry the sweet tartness I find so delicious, so sensual ... a lovely summer respite.

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sweet and spicy.. beautifully written drooling .. love it

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Tasty and spicy ;).  Perfect for a hot summer's night 

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4 hours ago, dughlas said:

I am fond of honey wine and these words carry the sweet tartness I find so delicious, so sensual ... a lovely summer respite.

 

Your kind thoughts and words are themselves a refreshing draught. If you find this item on the Spice Rack good, then I am happy. 

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2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

sweet and spicy.. beautifully written drooling .. love it

 

Thank you, tim. Words like these from a culinary artist like you mean a great deal. 

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2 hours ago, LitLover said:

Tasty and spicy ;).  Perfect for a hot summer's night 

 

Glad you liked this. The flavour grows on one!

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Just now, Parker Owens said:

 

Thank you, tim. Words like these from a culinary artist like you mean a great deal. 

nothing like some nice flank steak Parker xox

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1 minute ago, Mikiesboy said:

nothing like some nice flank steak Parker xox

 

Indeed; lean and muscled...

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