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    Parker Owens
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  • 07/03/2017
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Spice Rack - 9. Stimulation

A bit more piquant.

Your skin,

silk to my touch,

curves, sliding beneath hands

which caress, palms that entice and

seduce;

kisses

planted with a gardener's care

along the path of your spine

lead me to your

treasure.

AC Benus and Asamvav111 deserve my many thanks for their help. And you? Please leave a comment, if you feel so moved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Valkyrie
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Piquant, indeed... *fans self*  I liked the line 'kisses planted with a gardener's care'.  A nice addition to the series, Chef. :) 

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Parker Owens
5 minutes ago, Valkyrie said:

Piquant, indeed... *fans self*  I liked the line 'kisses planted with a gardener's care'.  A nice addition to the series, Chef. :) 

 

Thank you Val! Glad you liked that line, as I did, too. And it is getting a little warm, isn't it?

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dughlas

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Is this dessert? Something sweet with a flavor that lingers on the tongue ...

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Parker Owens

Oh, no, far too soon for dessert, or even an undressed salad. But the flavor is wonderfully sweet, I grant you. Thanks for reading!

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LitLover

Piquant might be a mild description. Oh my, my, my.  *borrows Val's fan*  Enticingly spicy, Parker :yes: 

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Parker Owens

Perhaps this salsa is a little peppery? I hope you liked it anyhow. Many thanks for reading this and commenting!

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Headstall

Oh my... naughty you are, my friend :) ... you had me at 'gardener's care' ... I do love my gardening, and of course there's... treasure... so rewarding to find. Exquisite... cheers... Gary....

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Parker Owens

Thank you. We share a love of gardening, I suspect. It was too good a comparison to miss. You're very kind to comment...

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northie

 

planted with a gardener's care. I don't think I've ever come across this metaphor in this situation. How wonderfully appropriate, though. ;) Yet another example of your way with language.

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Parker Owens
On July 4, 2017 at 8:21 AM, northie said:

 

planted with a gardener's care. I don't think I've ever come across this metaphor in this situation. How wonderfully appropriate, though. ;) Yet another example of your way with language.

 

You are so nice to notice that particular metaphor, as it appealed to me so very much. It was an opportunity not to be missed. Many thanks for continuing to read from the menu...

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Parker Owens
10 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Sensual and Sexy! I want to continue exploring your Spice Rack!

 

I hope you enjoy reading the text on every bottle, and sampling what's inside thoroughly. Many thanks for continuing to read from this collection. 

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Parker Owens
8 minutes ago, Puppilull said:

This is a hot one. I can almost feel it myself. In my hands and on my body. 

 

It is so good to get your reaction. And I am happy you enjoyed this particular addition. Better than a restaurant? Thanks again. 

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Parker Owens
On July 8, 2017 at 6:44 PM, Defiance19 said:

Like Gary, you had me at 'gardener's care..' That I understand, and this was caliente... 

 

I am so happy this poem added some heat and flavor to your day. And 'gardener's care' was inspired by my dirty fingernails. Thanks for reading!

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