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Down a Darkened Path

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Troy Neal has it all- good looks, smart and talented. A classmate, Jayden Henderson, finds himself struggling to survive a dangerous life when he is sent to live with his aunt and cousins after the sudden death of his mother. Late one night, when Troy's car runs out of gas on a dark, deserted street, fate brings them together. Can they survive a disturbing journey down a darkened path filled with insurmountable obstacles?

Warning: Before you begin reading, you should be aware that this story centers around a brutal and violent event involving the main character. Several scenes in this story may be upsetting and disturbing to some readers.  
 

Copyright © 2009 by Ronyx All Rights Reserved

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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 3,516 Words
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  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 4,734 Words
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  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 4,632 Words
    • 1,258 Views
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  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 4,139 Words
    • 1,093 Views
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  • 5. Chapter 5
    • 4,875 Words
    • 1,064 Views
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  • 6. Chapter 6
    • 4,241 Words
    • 989 Views
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  • 7. Chapter 7
    • 3,986 Words
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  • 8. Chapter 8
    • 4,127 Words
    • 935 Views
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  • 9. Chapter 9
    • 4,484 Words
    • 1,032 Views
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  • 10. Chapter 10
    • 4,503 Words
    • 1,115 Views
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  • 11. Chapter 11
    • 4,276 Words
    • 976 Views
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  • 12. Chapter 12
    • 3,963 Words
    • 997 Views
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  • 13. Chapter 13
    • 4,292 Words
    • 884 Views
    • 12 Comments
  • 14. Chapter 14
    • 3,804 Words
    • 862 Views
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  • 15. Chapter 15
    • 3,790 Words
    • 765 Views
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  • 16. Chapter 16
    • 4,040 Words
    • 821 Views
    • 16 Comments
  • 17. Chapter 17
    • 4,125 Words
    • 764 Views
    • 13 Comments
  • 18. Chapter 18
    • 4,911 Words
    • 850 Views
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JeffreyL

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

I highly recommend this well written story. There are parts of this story that are unpleasant, but they were handled carefully. The characters are believable, and I quickly came to care about them. The dialogue and the feelings of the characters seemed realistic. Now that all the chapters are available, this will be one of those hard to put down kind of stories. Thanks to Ronyx for sharing this story.

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chris191070

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Another fantastic story from Ron. Troy and Jayden find each other after coming together through different, but difficult circumstances for both of them.

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Sam Wyer

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this touching and moving story.  Troy and Jayden are beautifully rounded, engaging, and interesting characters that I couldn't help but care about.  I'm not going to spoil it if you haven't already read it, but it's a bumpy ride at times, which just seems to get more tense as things go on.  Anyway, you'll see for yourself in the end, because you should definitely need read this.  The only down side is that it just isn't long enough, having left me wanting more, although that's hardly a criticsm.

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