Ravings of a Rabid Werewolf - Poetry by Wolf - 21. Currents

I was right out there with you, waiting for fickle nature to decided it's time for a change. Well done

And maybe a little Beach Boys playing in the background to raise the excitement?! 😉

Seriously, you've painted a great word picture! Thanks.

As Jeffrey said, a wonderful picture.. loved this:

Even the current seems to be against us;

Holding us still in its clawed grip.

On 9/24/2018 at 7:31 PM, AC Benus said:

I was right out there with you, waiting for fickle nature to decided it's time for a change. Well done

 

Thank you AC.  I really need to spend more time learning the different aspects of poetry.  Being able to successfully compose new styles will be fun I think.

On 9/24/2018 at 11:02 PM, JeffreyL said:

And maybe a little Beach Boys playing in the background to raise the excitement?! 😉

Seriously, you've painted a great word picture! Thanks.

Thank you Jeff.  A little Beach Boys while surfing is always a good thing.

On 9/25/2018 at 3:05 PM, Mikiesboy said:

As Jeffrey said, a wonderful picture.. loved this:

 

Even the current seems to be against us;

Holding us still in its clawed grip.

Thank you tim   Floated in line with one leg of the pier for a half hour without paddling to stay in place.