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Warning: Some spoilers for those who haven't read the story Accepted GA Story: 31 March 18 Vigilant *In Progress* Sci-Fi Futuristic Gay Romance * Summary Ardant is an ex-Corps soldier faced with the harsh reality that everyone is moving on from the war against the Gahlamons except himself. Swept into a group seeking to protest the executive laws passed by the United Planets Association, Ardant struggles with personal issues and a shocking love interest. * Chapters ( ! -with beta reader ) ( * -in queue to be posted ) Arrival Meet Ardant, the veteran with a sunny disposition and witness the arrival of the Gahlamons! Stuck Urgent problems with your airship? Natibo Station has a Hub for all your needs as you wait for further notice! Program The Enemy-to-Allies Program set up by the UPA offers all Natibo Community clients the opportunity to meet and mingle our new friends, the Gahlamons, with lower rates and new amenities! Come visit our Port and you'll fall in love the features, join us today! Confront Not everyone will greet our newest guests to the community, and we understand your concerns but please remain calm and civil! Characters (those presented so far) Harthens Ardant Main Character Human Charter Security likes: coffee dislikes: Gahlamons Sarklet Ardant's Sister Human Stay-at-home-Mom likes: gardening dislikes: ignored Xar Ardant's Nephew Human Child likes: toys dislikes: Ardant Wilanos Maza Ardant's Friend Human - likes: running dislikes: confusion Lakla Sarklet's Friend Human - likes: - dislikes: not being in control Volders Rhagler Ardant's Neighbor Human - likes: family dislikes: Gahlamons Su'klythops (Suyi) Dathar Ardant's Neighbor Gahlamon - likes: - dislikes: - This blog post is subject to change through regular updates!

Hi everyone. I'm looking for an editor for my first story, "Sean and Dex". It's a gay fiction story with very little sex (saved towards the end but it probably won't be too graphic). It's a humorous friendship story about two best friends who are modern day Robin Hoods with a bit of supernatural elements. http://www.gayauthor...zbon/seananddex 1. Turn around expectations: I would like the turnaround within one week, but I'm okay with two weeks. 2. Worked with an Editor/Beta before: No. This is my first story. 3. Service needed: Someone to read my story and tell me where it sounds awkward or confusing. 4. Service expected: I'd like someone to proof-read my story for grammar, spelling mistakes, make suggestions on how things could be worded better if it sounds awkward. I don't need plot suggestions, story changes or anything creative, just editing. 5. How much is done: I have six chapters written (19,400 words). I don't know how long the story is going to be. 6. Software: I use Google Docs - I would provide the link to the doc on my Google shared drive. 7. Comments or inline edits: Inline edits, I'm really not that picky. 8. Snippet of story: I was feeling pretty lost. I was sad and angry at the world. It was such an unfair place sometimes. There was gang activity everywhere. Important funding were being cut from homeless shelters, orphanages and schools. Donations to these organizations were decreasing every year. Who was there to help those people? I thought about how Dex and I used to make all these plans to help people in need. What happened to those dreams? When did I forget about helping others? I needed to make a change. I needed my life to have meaning. I looked to my warrior who always guarded me. I saw so much potential in him. Life robbed him of an amazing life. Even more so, life robbed the world of the amazing Dex Ramirez these past years. He was smart enough to be anything he wanted to be. With him by my side, I knew we could make a difference. “I want to activate ‘Operation Black Smoke’,” I said. I knew he’d remember and I wouldn't have to explain. He didn't disappoint. He met my gaze and smiled his first genuine smile of the day, "Maybe without the swords." Thanks, Lizbon